style editing for gls entries

glossary.tex

@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@
   name={Jotters},
   text={jotter},
   prefix={a\space},
-  parent={templeOfBeasts},
+  parent={guard},
   description={do paperwork for the \glsentrytext{guard}, and control everything that their seniors don't care to manage},
 }
 
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@
   prefix={a\space},
   category={location},
   parent={templeOfSickness},
-  description={Here the sick, disabled, or dying of \glsentrytext{fenestra} tend to each other.
+  description={take in the sick, disabled, or dying of \glsentrytext{fenestra}, where they tend to each other.
   Long-term staff always have some long-term disability, such as missing limbs.
   Many of the \glsentrytext{guard} start a new career here},
 }
@@ -769,7 +769,7 @@
   symbol={\glsentrytext{justice}},
   nonumberlist,
   description={Left to their own paranoia, people form mobs, and mob-justice prevails.
-  Luckily, this temple can thwart \glsentrytext{paik} by providing impartial, official, justice},
+  This temple thwarts the worst plans of the god \glsentrytext{paik} by providing impartial, official, justice},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{court}{
@@ -789,7 +789,8 @@
   nonumberlist,
   parent={templeOfJustice},
   prefix={a\space},
-  description={enforce the law, at least in towns},
+  description={bear the heavy burden of enforcing laws, and maintaining the \glsentrytext{court}.
+  Every \glsentrytext{village} with a couple of hundred souls has a keeper to keep them right, and collect payments for the vital service they provide},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{warden}{
@@ -798,7 +799,7 @@
   nonumberlist,
   parent={keeper},
   prefix={a\space},
-  description={make the laws and decide fitting punishments for criminals},
+  description={make the laws and decide fitting punishments for criminals in their \glsentrytext{court}},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{sunGuard}{
@@ -834,7 +835,7 @@
   prefix={a\space},
   category={location},
   parent={templeOfFrost},
-  description={houses a massive fire, many looms, and plenty of space for anyone who wants to hear a long story},
+  description={houses a massive fire, many looms, and plenty of space to tell a long story},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{weaver}{
@@ -872,7 +873,7 @@
   sort={Armourer's Guild},
   parent={templeOfHate},
   description={take in angry, young people, and redirect their anger into work and negotiation skills.
-  They handle all the major disputes which nobody wants to take to the \glsentrytext{templeOfJustice}},
+  They handle all the major disputes which nobody wants to take to the \glsentrytext{templeOfJustice}, and often become the de-facto arbiters when one \glsentrytext{warden} cannot agree with another},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{armourer}{
@@ -900,7 +901,8 @@
   symbol={\glsentrytext{curiosity}},
   nonumberlist,
   description={People who go searching for answers often don't come back.
-  This temple keeps an official log of all curiosities so that people don't have to go anywhere dangerous to learn},
+  This temple keeps an official log of all curiosities so that people don't have to go anywhere dangerous to learn -- they can just read.
+  Anyone not content to stay inside and read eventually goes to write a travel-book},
 }
 
 \newglossaryentry{paperGuild}{