From ad14e0b4b7a54a182297a1344914da57bfb85bdf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Malin Freeborn <malinfreeborn@posteo.net>
Date: Sun, 12 May 2024 01:20:31 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] style editing for gls entries
---
glossary.tex | 18 ++++++++++--------
1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/glossary.tex b/glossary.tex
index a42a6c1a..12a58a71 100644
--- a/glossary.tex
+++ b/glossary.tex
@@ -634,7 +634,7 @@
name={Jotters},
text={jotter},
prefix={a\space},
- parent={templeOfBeasts},
+ parent={guard},
description={do paperwork for the \glsentrytext{guard}, and control everything that their seniors don't care to manage},
}
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@
prefix={a\space},
category={location},
parent={templeOfSickness},
- description={Here the sick, disabled, or dying of \glsentrytext{fenestra} tend to each other.
+ description={take in the sick, disabled, or dying of \glsentrytext{fenestra}, where they tend to each other.
Long-term staff always have some long-term disability, such as missing limbs.
Many of the \glsentrytext{guard} start a new career here},
}
@@ -769,7 +769,7 @@
symbol={\glsentrytext{justice}},
nonumberlist,
description={Left to their own paranoia, people form mobs, and mob-justice prevails.
- Luckily, this temple can thwart \glsentrytext{paik} by providing impartial, official, justice},
+ This temple thwarts the worst plans of the god \glsentrytext{paik} by providing impartial, official, justice},
}
\newglossaryentry{court}{
@@ -789,7 +789,8 @@
nonumberlist,
parent={templeOfJustice},
prefix={a\space},
- description={enforce the law, at least in towns},
+ description={bear the heavy burden of enforcing laws, and maintaining the \glsentrytext{court}.
+ Every \glsentrytext{village} with a couple of hundred souls has a keeper to keep them right, and collect payments for the vital service they provide},
}
\newglossaryentry{warden}{
@@ -798,7 +799,7 @@
nonumberlist,
parent={keeper},
prefix={a\space},
- description={make the laws and decide fitting punishments for criminals},
+ description={make the laws and decide fitting punishments for criminals in their \glsentrytext{court}},
}
\newglossaryentry{sunGuard}{
@@ -834,7 +835,7 @@
prefix={a\space},
category={location},
parent={templeOfFrost},
- description={houses a massive fire, many looms, and plenty of space for anyone who wants to hear a long story},
+ description={houses a massive fire, many looms, and plenty of space to tell a long story},
}
\newglossaryentry{weaver}{
@@ -872,7 +873,7 @@
sort={Armourer's Guild},
parent={templeOfHate},
description={take in angry, young people, and redirect their anger into work and negotiation skills.
- They handle all the major disputes which nobody wants to take to the \glsentrytext{templeOfJustice}},
+ They handle all the major disputes which nobody wants to take to the \glsentrytext{templeOfJustice}, and often become the de-facto arbiters when one \glsentrytext{warden} cannot agree with another},
}
\newglossaryentry{armourer}{
@@ -900,7 +901,8 @@
symbol={\glsentrytext{curiosity}},
nonumberlist,
description={People who go searching for answers often don't come back.
- This temple keeps an official log of all curiosities so that people don't have to go anywhere dangerous to learn},
+ This temple keeps an official log of all curiosities so that people don't have to go anywhere dangerous to learn -- they can just read.
+ Anyone not content to stay inside and read eventually goes to write a travel-book},
}
\newglossaryentry{paperGuild}{
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