adjust spell summaries

magic.sty

@@ -23,27 +23,28 @@
 
 \newcommand{\spell}[7]{
   \settoggle{distant}{false}%
+  \settoggle{duplicated}{false}%
   \settoggle{insubstantial}{false}
   \setcounter{spelllevel}{1}%
   \foreach \s in {#4}{%
     \stepcounter{spelllevel}%
   }%
-  \subsubsection[\textbf{#1}: \iftoggle{duplicated}{\spellArea~targets}{Have target} #6. (Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel}, Spheres:~#2, Skill:~#5, Range: \spellRange)]{#1}%
+  \subsubsection[\textbf{#1}: #6. (Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel}, Spheres:~#2, Skill:~#5, Range: \spellRange)]{#1}%
   \label{#1}%
 
   (#3
   #4
   #2),
-  \glsentrytext{mp} Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel},
+  Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel},
   \setRange%
   Range:~\spellRange,
   \iftoggle{duplicated}{%
     \setArea%
     Targets:~\spellArea, %
   }{}%
-  \underline{Skill:~#5}
+  Skill:~\underline{#5}
   \vspace{.5em}\afterparnoindent
-  \index[spells]{\textbf{#1}: \iftoggle{duplicated}{\spellArea~targets}{Have target} #6. (Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel}, Spheres:~#2, Skill:~#5, \mbox{Range: \spellRange})}
+  \index[spells]{\textbf{#1}: #6. (Cost:~\arabic{spelllevel}, Spheres:~#2, Skill:~#5, Range: \spellRange\iftoggle{duplicated}{, Targets: \spellArea}{})}
 
   #7
 }
@@ -72,7 +73,7 @@
       \ifnum\value{track}<1%
         \renewcommand\spellRange{touch}%
       \else%
-        \renewcommand\spellRange{\arabic{track} steps}%
+        \renewcommand\spellRange{\arabic{track}~steps}%
       \fi%
     }%
 }

spells/air1.tex

-
 \spell{Wind Chill}% Name
   {\mAir}% Spheres
   {Wax}% Action
   {}% Enhancements
   {Seafaring}% Skill
-  {lose \arabic{spelllevel} \gls{ap}}% Description
+  {target loses \arabic{spelllevel} \gls{ap}}% Description
   {
     The mage blasts the target with chilled wind, draining them of \arabic{spelllevel} \gls{ap}.
     In close-range combat, the spell nullifies an enemy's attack against the caster.
   }
 
-
 \spell{Noxious Fog}% Name
   {\mAir}% Spheres
   {Wane}% Action
   {}% Enhancements
   {Crafts}% Skill
-  {Foul air inflicts 3~\glspl{fatigue}}% Description
+  {a pocket of foul air inflicts 3~\glspl{fatigue} each round}% Description
   {
     The caster pollutes the air, making it stink, and caustic to breath.
     Anyone can attempt to hold their breath, but those not expecting the nauseating fumes suffer 3 \glspl{fatigue}.
@@ -25,14 +23,12 @@
     It dissipates after a couple of turns, or less if wind is present.
   }
 
-
-
 \spell{Bubble}% Name
   {\mAir}% Spheres
   {Warp}% Action
   {}% Enhancements
   {Seafaring}% Skill
-  {A small bubble surrounds the caster}% Description
+  {a small bubble surrounds the caster}% Description
   {
     A bubble, around 1 metre in diameter, gains a wobbly `shell', which holds it in place.
     While mostly invisible, the bubble is real, and will go nowhere, resisting all but the strongest winds.
@@ -41,4 +37,3 @@
   }
 
 
-

spells/fate1.tex

@@ -3,12 +3,11 @@
   {Wax}% Action
   {}% Enhancements
   {Empathy}% Skill
-  {gain 1D6 \glspl{fp}}% Description
+  {target gains $1D6$ \glspl{fp}}% Description
   {
-    The mage blesses the target with high hopes for their future, bestowing 1D6 \glspl{fp} immediately.
+    The mage blesses the target with high hopes for their future, bestowing $1D6$ \glspl{fp} immediately.
   }
 
-
 \spell{Curse}% Name
   {\mFate}% Spheres
   {Wane}% Action
@@ -16,11 +15,9 @@
   {Deceit}% Skill
   {lose $1D6$ \glspl{fp}}% Description
   {
-
-The caster notes the worst of someone's possible futures -- the most unpleasant thing which is reasonably likely.
+  The caster notes the worst of someone's possible futures -- the most unpleasant thing which is reasonably likely.
   }
 
-
 The target then loses $1D6$~\glspl{fp}.
 
 \spell{Twisted Fate}% Name
@@ -29,11 +26,24 @@ The target then loses $1D6$~\glspl{fp}.
   {}% Enhancements
   {Tactics}% Skill
   {target gains 1 monster encounter}% Description
+  {
+    The caster hexes the target with death on the road, hoping they will not meet their destination.
+    Within $1D6$ days, the target meets with a monstrous encounter.%
+    \exRef{judgement}{Judgement}{monsterEncounters}
 
-The caster hexes the target with death on the road, hoping they will not meet their destination.
-Within $1D6$ days, the target meets with a monstrous encounter.%
-\exRef{judgement}{Judgement}{monsterEncounters}
+    \Glspl{npc} targeted by this spell will survive if only their \gls{xp} value is greater than the monster they would encounter.
+    Otherwise, they meet a gruesome fate on the road.
+  }
 
-\Glspl{npc} targeted by this spell will survive if only their \gls{xp} value is greater than the monster they would encounter.
-Otherwise, they meet a gruesome fate on the road.
+\spell{Fathom}% Name
+  {\mFate}% Spheres
+  {Witness}% Action
+  {}% Enhancements
+  {Empathy}% Skill
+  {check if target carries \glspl{fp}}% Description
+  {
+    With a short interaction, and some questions about family, the caster discerns if the target has any special fate.
+
+    The spell produces only `yes' (if the target carries \glspl{fp}), or `no' (if they do not), without further details.
+  }
 

spells/fate2.tex

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   {Wax}% Action
   {\duplicated}% Enhancements
   {Empathy}% Skill
-  {gain \arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
+  {\spellArea{} targets gain \arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
   {}
 
 \spell{Mass Curse}% Name
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   {Wane}% Action
   {\duplicated}% Enhancements
   {Deceit}% Skill
-  {lose \arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
+  {\spellArea{} targets lose \arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
   {}
 
 \spell{Hateful Cry}% Name
@@ -20,10 +20,8 @@
   {Wane}% Action
   {\distant}% Enhancements
   {Deceit}% Skill
-  {lose \arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
+  {target loses 1D6+\arabic{spelllevel} \glspl{fp}}% Description
   {
     One target at \spellRange{} loses \dmg{spelllevel}~\glspl{fp}.
-
-    Repeat: \nameref{Hateful Cry}
   }