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correct cycles description

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name={Cosmology},
text={cosmology},
nonumberlist,
description={every year, the \glsentrytext{ainumar} orbits the Sun, and every \glsentrytext{cycle}, we orbit the \glsentrytext{ainumar}},
description={This world orbits the great \glsentrytext{ainumar}, which orbits the Sun},
}
\longnewglossaryentry{ainumar}{
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text={cycle},
prefix={a\space},
parent={cosmology},
description={last for sixty days, after which \glsentrytext{fenestra} has travelled around the \glsentrytext{ainumar}.
Each cycle begins and ends with a violent \glsentrytext{storm}, which marks a change in temperature for the next cycle.
description={divide the year into six chunks of sixty days.
As the world swings closer or farther from the Sun, the weather changes dramatically.
\orrery[1/8, 1/23, 2/8, 2/23, 3/8, 3/23]
After six cycles, the \glsentrytext{ainumar} completes a revolution around the Sun, and a new year begins},
Each one begins and ends with a violent \glsentrytext{storm}, which marks signals a new cycle has begun},
}
\longnewglossaryentry{edge}{
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