grammer and phrasing

combat.tex

@@ -281,7 +281,11 @@ is a rating used for certain creatures which have natural armour without weak sp
 When attacking an opponent in armour, it is possible to make a shot so precise as to get a gap in a helmet, strike an opponent in the eye or slide a blade between overlapping plates.
 To get a Vitals Shot, one simply needs to roll high enough over the target's regular \gls{tn} and all armour (meaning \gls{dr}) can be ignored.
 
-For partial armour, anyone rolling a Margin of 3 (i.e. 3 points above the \gls{tn}) ignores the \gls{dr} from the armour. If the regular \gls{tn} is 8 then any roll of 11 or greater counts as a Vitals Shot. Complete armour requires a Margin of 5 to ignore the armour, so if the \gls{tn} were 10 then a Strike would require a total of 15 to bypass the armour. Perfect armour cannot be bypassed by a sufficiently high roll.
+For partial armour, anyone rolling a Margin of 3 (i.e.
+3 points above the \gls{tn}) ignores the \gls{dr} from the armour.
+If the regular \gls{tn} is 8 then any roll of 11 or greater counts as a Vitals Shot.
+Complete armour requires a Margin of 5 to ignore the armour, so if the \gls{tn} were 10 then a hit would require a total of 15 to bypass the armour.
+Perfect armour cannot be bypassed by a sufficiently high roll.
 
 \iftoggle{verbose}{
   \pic{Roch_Hercka/vitals_shot}{\label{roch:vitals}}
@@ -700,7 +704,7 @@ Dropping a weapon costs no \glspl{ap}, though they will be defenceless unless th
 \subsubsection[Flanking: Gain +2 to attack]{Flanking}\label{flank}
 
 Attacks from someone's anterior side gain a +2 Bonus.
-Up to 6 opponents can attack a lone character, and any available walls can reduce this number.
+Up to 6 opponents can attack a lone character, but any available walls can reduce this number.
 
 \pic{Roch_Hercka/stances}{\label{roch:stances}}
 

gm.tex

@@ -965,7 +965,7 @@ The TN varies from 10 to 18, depending upon the lock's complexity.
 \begin{figure*}[t]
 
   \begin{nametable}[ccX]{Gathering Table}
-    Tundra & Open Forest & Result \\\hline
+    Tundra & Forest & Result \\\hline
     11  & 10+ & Food for one, +1 per margin. \\
     10  & 9 & Nothing found. \\
     8-9 & 8 & Lost: make a navigation roll (below), or wander in the wrong direction. \\

knacks.tex

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ You lose the bonuses if you spend a round without attacking.
 
 \subsubsection{Brawler}
 
-The character receives +2 to Strike when making unarmed attacks or grappling.
+The character receives +2 to Attack when making unarmed attacks or grappling.
 
 \subsubsection{Cutting Swing}
 
@@ -103,8 +103,8 @@ Normally, Sneak Attacks inflict +2 Damage, so someone with 3 Knacks would inflic
 
 You require 1 less to achieve a Vitals Shot (see page \pageref{vitals}).
 \iftoggle{verbose}{
-  For example, when targeting an opponent with a Evasion score of +2 and Partial armour, they would normally require a score of 9 to hit and a score of 12 to make a Vitals Shot which ignores all armour.
-  With this Knack they still require a score of 9 to hit but only a score of 11 to make a Vitals Shot.
+  For example, when targeting an opponent with an Attack score of +2 and Partial armour, they would normally require a score of 9 to hit and a score of 12 to make a Vitals Shot which ignores all armour.
+  With this Knack you still require a score of 9 to hit but only a score of 11 to make a Vitals Shot.
 }{}
 People with this Knack can also bypass Perfect armour by rolling 6 points above the target's \gls{tn}.