reformat and reword combat example

config @ a063fdc5

-Subproject commit 703f9f195ff06d7120e4093678358be1ef2e6b3d
+Subproject commit a063fdc5b2e5fc81f19e2a8318d0e7b7e0393733

story/10-combat.tex

@@ -13,11 +13,13 @@ Looking back, the enemy was nearing and everyone was out of breath.
 Arneson suggested a rest to make sure they would be ready for the fight -- they could fight downhill against an enemy fatigued from walking upwards.
 He calmly got out the rations -- some cheese, smoked pork, oatcakes and a flagon of wine.
 
-\pic{Boris_Pecikozic/nura_brawl}{\label{boris:brawl}}
+``May as well have the best of the rations now, eh, friends?'', Arneson said.
+He slowly masticated his age-hardened meal and tried to smile back at the nine foot monstrosity, which was recently a man, clamboured up, pounding its great feet up the mountain's slopes, surrounded by half a dozen hobgoblins, each the size of a broad-shouldered man.
 
-``May as well have the best of the rations now, eh, friends?'', Arneson said while smiling, and they slowly masticated their age-hardened meal and tried to smile back as the nine foot monstrosity which was so recently a man made its way up to them, pounding its great feet up the mountainous slopes, surrounded by half a dozen hobgoblins, each the size of a broad-shouldered man.
+As the hobgoblins neared the plateau where the trio sat, they began to make their war cries.
+Everyone slowly took out their weapons.
 
-As the hobgoblins neared the plateau where the trio sat they began to make their war cries, but Arneson just sits and ate his last oatcake slowly. They began to sprint upwards across the rocky ground.
+\pic{Boris_Pecikozic/nura_brawl}{\label{boris:brawl}}
 
 \end{exampletext}
 
@@ -58,7 +60,7 @@ As the hobgoblins neared the plateau where the trio sat they began to make their
 
 \sideBySide{
   Arneson's Damage total is:
-  $$1D6 + Strength (2) + Longsword (2) = 1D6+4 = 2D6 = 4$$
+  $$1D6 + Str. (2) + Longsword (2) = 1D6+4 = 2D6 = 4$$
 }{
   The ogre shrieks in pain as Arneson's sword sticks in, and pulls away, eying up an easier breakfast.
 }