some more fixing to the english translation

src/who/manifesto.en.md

@@ -20,17 +20,16 @@ to both individuals or groups sharing our same aims or ideals.
 Standing outside the commercial attitude of payed services and web spaces, we happily welcome those unresting towards cultural and media
 censorship, against the globalized imaginery being prepared, packed and sold to us each and every day.
 
-The services we provide are not intended for (directly or indirectly) commercial activities, for use by organized religion or political
-parties, or, in short, by those who already have the means and resources sufficient to spread widely their own ideas, or who use the concept of representation
+The services we provide are not intended for (directly or indirectly) commercial use, or to be used by organized religions or political
+parties, or, in short, by those who already have the means and resources sufficient to widely spread their own ideas, or who use the concept of representation
 and (explicit or implicit) delegation in their day-to-day relationships and projects.
 
 The right to and need for privacy and anonymity must be respected.
 
 We guarantee that we keep no logs, that we won't ask for personal data to grant access to any of our services, and that we will do
-everything we can to keep our anonymous remailer, anonymizer and everything else that ensures the privacy and confidentiality of your
-communications up and running safely.
+everything we can to keep the services that ensures the privacy and confidentiality of your communications up and running securely.
 
-Knowledge and resources grow through sharing. That is why we encourage the systematic, organized and completely free distribution of
+Knowledge and resources grow through sharing. This is why we encourage the systematic, organized and completely free distribution of
 cultural material, auto-productions and documentation, while why we fight against traditional copyright and support the adoption of free and
 open-source software and licenses.