From a6b29b91190f74550138eecaad2e014598f91e01 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Antoine=20Beaupr=C3=A9?= <anarcat@debian.org>
Date: Wed, 4 Oct 2017 09:08:57 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] fixup description to remove user confusion (Closes: #823104)

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 debian/control | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 95bfea7..b158732 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -41,20 +41,20 @@ Recommends: python-qrencode
           , python-mock
 Suggests: monkeysign-doc
 Description: OpenPGP key signing and exchange for humans
- monkeysign is a tool to overhaul the OpenPGP keysigning experience
+ monkeysign is a project to overhaul the OpenPGP keysigning experience
  and bring it closer to something that most primates can understand.
  .
- The project makes use of cheap digital cameras and the type of bar
- code known as a QRcode to provide a human-friendly yet still-secure
- keysigning experience.
+ To achieve this goal, it makes use of cheap digital cameras and the
+ type of bar code known as a QRcode to provide a human-friendly yet
+ still-secure keysigning experience.
  .
  No more reciting tedious strings of hexadecimal characters.  And, you
  can build a little rogue's gallery of the people that you have met
  and exchanged keys with!
  .
- Monkeysign is the commandline signing software, a caff
- replacement. Monkeyscan is the graphical user interface that scans
- qrcodes.
+ Monkeysign is also the name of it's commandline signing software, a
+ caff replacement. Monkeyscan is the graphical user interface that
+ scans qrcodes.
 
 Package: monkeysign-doc
 Architecture: all
@@ -65,19 +65,19 @@ Replaces: monkeysign (<< 2.1.0)
 Breaks: monkeysign (<< 2.1.0)
 Section: doc
 Description: OpenPGP key signing and exchange for humans (documentation)
- monkeysign is a tool to overhaul the OpenPGP keysigning experience
+ monkeysign is a project to overhaul the OpenPGP keysigning experience
  and bring it closer to something that most primates can understand.
  .
- The project makes use of cheap digital cameras and the type of bar
- code known as a QRcode to provide a human-friendly yet still-secure
- keysigning experience.
+ To achieve this goal, it makes use of cheap digital cameras and the
+ type of bar code known as a QRcode to provide a human-friendly yet
+ still-secure keysigning experience.
  .
  No more reciting tedious strings of hexadecimal characters.  And, you
  can build a little rogue's gallery of the people that you have met
  and exchanged keys with!
  .
- Monkeysign is the commandline signing software, a caff
- replacement. Monkeyscan is the graphical user interface that scans
- qrcodes.
+ Monkeysign is also the name of it's commandline signing software, a
+ caff replacement. Monkeyscan is the graphical user interface that
+ scans qrcodes.
  .
  This package ships with the builtin documentation.
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