From b7b87ba9ff82a355334bcba9e06fbf53f9149254 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Malin Freeborn <malinfreeborn@posteo.net>
Date: Sat, 2 Mar 2024 23:12:26 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] edit examples intro
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play.tex | 9 ++++-----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/play.tex b/play.tex
index d58ccfb0..77f989e5 100644
--- a/play.tex
+++ b/play.tex
@@ -3,18 +3,17 @@
\begin{multicols}{2}
\noindent
-Take this skeleton as a guide to pacing and background standards.
-\Glspl{sq} add far more meat, trials, and fear to a game once they start, that meat's no good without a healthy skeleton of a game.
-
+Take this skeleton as a guide to pacing, and as standards which often belong in the background.
+Once you get into the swing of this simple cycle -- march, decisions, resolve, repeat -- the simple resolution system can fill days or weeks of in-game time quite easily.
\glsadd{guard}
-Once you get into the swing of this simple cycle -- march, encounter, actions, repeat -- the simple resolution system can fill days or weeks of in-game time quite easily.
How much the troupe actually engage with their \gls{guard} missions depends on the players -- they may lean into them, and feel pressures on all sides as they juggle a chaotic world with their duties, or may end up abandoning them, and wandering \gls{fenestra} as free agents or bandits (and who can tell the difference?).
+
\sideBySide{
\begin{description}
\item[\gls{gm}:]
- Fenestra is currently experiencing the freezing season of Qualmea, when the trees shed their leaves, letting sunlight shine on roads which are slowly turning white, with little specks of snow.
+ Fenestra is currently experiencing the freezing season of \gls{Qualmea}, when the trees shed their leaves, letting sunlight shine on roads which are slowly turning white, with little specks of snow.
\item[Player 1:]
(Laiquon)
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