From a11c6a3095338d780472e39c44c35c0fa03d7268 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Malin Freeborn <malinfreeborn@posteo.net>
Date: Sat, 20 Jan 2024 19:16:05 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] intro edits

---
 intro.tex | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/intro.tex b/intro.tex
index 8fe078ea..f181347c 100644
--- a/intro.tex
+++ b/intro.tex
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@ A skeleton of the core rules exist in every adventure module.
 This rule book contains extended systems which either explain the core rules with examples, and show using them for various sub-systems (in fact perhaps it should be called `BIND: Systems \& Explanations', but that's less catchy than `BIND: Core').
 
 The adventure modules also contain their own price-lists in the form of handouts, so players can just take the page they want, on its own.
-This stops the persistent problem at my table of players persistently figuring out how to buy weapons in the core rules (`is it under ``equipment'', or ``combat'', where the weapon tables are?').
+This stops my table's problem of players persistently figuring out how to buy weapons in the core rules (`is it under ``equipment'', or ``combat'', where the weapon tables are?').
 Perhaps it solves the same problem at your table.
 
 On a similar note, everything that players repeatedly try to reference sits in the \textit{Book of Stories}.
 It has the rules on character creation, improving Traits, crafting backstories, and creating magical items and new spells.
 
-Finally, the \textit{Book of Judgement} provides a high-level view of \gls{fenestra}'s guilds, beasts, and fiends; world-building material, and myriad random tables.
+Finally, the \textit{Book of Judgement} provides a high-level view of \gls{fenestra}'s guilds, beasts, and fiends; world-building material, and so many random tables that the game practically plays itself.
 
 \subsection*{Special Thanks \ldots}
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ Finally, the \textit{Book of Judgement} provides a high-level view of \gls{fenes
 
 \paragraph{Neil McDonnell} for the basic photograph which became the Polymorph image on page \pageref{Roch_Hercka/polymorph},
 
-\paragraph{Roch Hercka} for the myriad wonderful pencil sketches (pages 
+\paragraph{Roch Hercka} for the many wonderful pencil sketches (pages 
 \pageref{Roch_Hercka/dwarf_encumbrance}, 
 \pageref{Roch_Hercka/cave_fight}, 
 \pageref{Roch_Hercka/stances}, 
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