From 49b37053af5d87d915755b0e55db252ebe522e22 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Malin Freeborn <malinfreeborn@posteo.net>
Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2024 20:30:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] phrasing edits
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README.md | 4 ++--
traits.tex | 4 ++--
2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
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@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ For full instructions on compiling, see the [wiki](https://gitlab.com/bindrpg/co
## Related Books
- For a short introduction module, grab a copy of [Escape from the Horde][intro module], and the pre-gen [character handouts][intro handouts].
-- For personalized character creation, snatch the [players' guide][stories].
+- For character creation, print the [players' guide][stories].
- To craft your own section of a monster-ridden world, open the [Book of Judgement][judgement].
# Rules
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ All rules are geared towards fast resolutions and player choices.
* No initiative rolls - just go!
* Whoever has the most Action Points can interrupt and demand to go first.
- Spellcasters spend Mana Points.
-- GMs don't roll much, so they can focus on interpretation and reaction.
+- GMs don't roll often, so they can focus on interpretation and reaction.
# Get Involved
diff --git a/traits.tex b/traits.tex
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@@ -574,10 +574,10 @@ Of course the \gls{guard} have no use for any of those horrible things, but sinc
Medicine is a primitive but effective art, regrettably full of nonsense and superstition, but mandatory when it comes to keeping someone with a serious wound alive.
\begin{description}
- \item[\roll{Strength}{Medicine}]
+ \item[\roll{Dexterity}{Medicine}]
lets someone fix a twisted bone or nose.
If someone has only 1 \gls{hp} of Damage, a medic can heal it, leaving them with only 1 \gls{ep} instead.
- A failed roll inflicts an additional \gls{hp} instead.
+ A failed roll inflicts an additional \gls{hp} of Damage instead.
\item[\roll{Intelligence}{Medicine}]
covers making poisons, and figuring out which poison has affected someone.
See \autopageref{poison} for details.
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