From 1faa6b49a82335457c781615fa174d7570c1f690 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Malin Freeborn <malinfreeborn@tutamail.com>
Date: Wed, 19 May 2021 01:12:13 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] reduce problem warning

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 intro.tex | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/intro.tex b/intro.tex
index b2f99d91..f1a07229 100644
--- a/intro.tex
+++ b/intro.tex
@@ -37,7 +37,9 @@ If you're looking for a pre made campaign world, monsters, and stories to tell,
 \subsection*{The Right to Improve}
 
 \noindent
-This book has some serious problems, and that's fine.  I've put this under a share-alike licence,\footnote{\tt GNU General Public License 3 or (at your option) any later version.} so anyone can grab a copy of the basic \LaTeX~ document it's written in and change things.  This isn't the Open Gaming Licence of D20 where they magnanimously allow you to use their word for a mechanic and let you publish things for their products -- this is a publicly owned book.
+This book has problems, and that's fine.
+I've put this under a share-alike licence,\footnote{\tt GNU General Public License 3 or (at your option) any later version.} so anyone can grab a copy of the basic \LaTeX~ document it's written in and make improvements.
+This isn't the Open Gaming Licence of D20 where they magnanimously allow you to use their word for a mechanic and let you publish things for their products -- this is a publicly owned book.
 
 No longer do imaginative \acrshortpl{gm} have to scribble their inspired house rules onto the back of an old banking statement and Cellotape it to the last page of the core book.
 Instead, you have the complete source documents, and can modify it as you please, creating a cohesive book.
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