From 537eeea2c2086616c7209d17b4eaceb8c63b31d3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: sub <sub@incal.net> Date: Sat, 18 Apr 2020 13:44:40 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] improved the translation --- src/who/manifesto.en.md | 25 +++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/who/manifesto.en.md b/src/who/manifesto.en.md index 2585664..5e7f528 100644 --- a/src/who/manifesto.en.md +++ b/src/who/manifesto.en.md @@ -14,28 +14,28 @@ Setting up an independent server seems to us to be a good point to start and rea We believe that communication must be free - and *for free* - and, therefore, universally accessible. We try to accomplish all this by offering internet services (web sites, e-mail, mailing lists, chats, instant messaging, anonymous -remailing, blogs, newsletters, and more) to either individuals and collective projects agreeing to our same aims and sharing our ideals, -using our best skills and knowledges to defend users privacy. +remailing, blogs, newsletters, and more) using our best skills and knowledge to defend users privacy, +to both individuals or groups sharing our same aims or ideals. Standing outside the commercial attitude of payed services and web spaces, we happily welcome those unresting towards cultural and media -censorship, towards the globalized imaginery being prepared, packed and sold us every day. +censorship, against the globalized imaginery being prepared, packed and sold to us each and every day. The services we provide are not intended for (directly or indirectly) commercial activities, for use by organized religion or political -parties, or, in short, by anyone who already has means and resources to spread widely its ideas, or who use the concept of representation -and (explicit or implicit) delegation in its day-to-day relationships and projects. +parties, or, in short, by those who already have the means and resources sufficient to spread widely their own ideas, or who use the concept of representation +and (explicit or implicit) delegation in their day-to-day relationships and projects. The right to and need for privacy and anonymity must be respected. We guarantee that we keep no logs, that we won't ask for personal data to grant access to any of our services, and that we will do everything we can to keep our anonymous remailer, anonymizer and everything else that ensures the privacy and confidentiality of your -communications running and safe. +communications up and running safely. Knowledge and resources grow through sharing. That is why we encourage the systematic, organized and completely free distribution of -cultural material, self-productions and documentation, and why we fight against traditional copyright and support the adoption free and +cultural material, auto-productions and documentation, while why we fight against traditional copyright and support the adoption of free and open-source software and licenses. -We called ourselves **Inventati** because we strive to find ways to translate in the digital world issues that are part of struggles and -their organizing, overcoming the limits and constraints of reality. Ie: a plenum can be made permanent and continuous through the use of a +We called ourselves **Inventati** because we strive to find ways to translate issues that are part of struggles and +their organizing, overcoming the limits and constraints of reality in the digital world. Ie: a plenum can be made permanent and continuous through the use of a mailing list. We called ourselves **Autistici**, instead, for the passion we have for understanding the technical tools and for exposing the politics @@ -46,11 +46,12 @@ Starting from the technical tools we use we came to develop a clear array of pol and lives: privacy, anonymity, free sharing of knowledge just to mention a few. We believe that media and communication should not be the exclusive domain of information professionals. We believe in the value of -self-management: this is why we have no sponsors or funding of any kind, apart from voluntary subscriptions by those who believe that our +self-management: this is why we have no sponsors or funding of any kind, apart from voluntary donations from those who believe that our project is important and must survive. None of us earns a cent from this project (in fact, quite the opposite). -We share collectively any decision about technical and political aspects of our servers and projects. We discuss everything through the use -of mailing lists, so that all of our debates and process is available and accessible to any single person participating in the collective. +All decisions about technical and political aspects of our servers and projects are taken collectively. We discuss everything through the use +of mailing lists and other forms of mediated communication, so that all of our debates and process are available and accessible to any +single person participating in the collective. We have no coordinator, and no spokesperson, and decisions are not reached by voting. -- GitLab