From 4e2a8d800ed68acf152baf9b4075934643043e07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: sub <sub@incal.net>
Date: Sun, 19 Apr 2020 16:58:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] from e' meglio di against in un botto di casi

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 src/who/privacy-policy.en.md | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/who/privacy-policy.en.md b/src/who/privacy-policy.en.md
index 86fab3d..dbfad38 100644
--- a/src/who/privacy-policy.en.md
+++ b/src/who/privacy-policy.en.md
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ meant to protect all data with automated anonymization applied before we start p
 that constitute a breach of our Terms of Services (spamming, DDoS and others), we will only be 
 able to recover from our servers an anonymized IP address possibly relatable to a user’s account 
 but not to a certain physical subject. We store logs of user activity for a period up to 15 days 
-(unless specified otherwise per service). 
-Data regarding users’ activity helps us diagnose software issues, maintain security of the 
-systems against intrusion, and monitor the health of the platform.
+(unless otherwise specified per service). 
+Data regarding users’ activity helps us diagnose software issues, preserve security of the 
+systems from intrusion, and monitor the health of the platform.
 
 We use disk encryption on all data to mitigate the risk of data leaks in cases where 
 servers might be stolen, seized, or in any way physically tampered with. 
@@ -159,9 +159,9 @@ us to disable and delete unused or abandoned accounts.
 We keep track of the users’ activity on our Services, but the logs we store never 
 contain any personally identifying information, and do not include information 
 related to activities outside of our platform. A/I uses this data to help diagnose 
-software issues, protect the system against intrusion, and monitor the health of 
+software issues, protect the system from intrusion, and monitor the health of 
 the services. We store anonymized logs of the Services' operation for a period up
-to 15 days, unless specified otherwise.
+to 15 days, unless otherwise specified.
 
 ### Data storage and use
 
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ Data is stored  only inside of the EU or within GDPR abiding countries;
 we have direct and exclusive access to all the dedicated servers where the data 
 is stored. The processing of data takes place exclusively within EU territory 
 and GDPR abiding countries. Communication between all servers is encrypted 
-with “state of the art” protocols in order to protect any information against 
+with “state of the art” protocols in order to protect any information from 
 unauthorized access, unauthorized alteration, destruction or disclosure of data. 
 We do not use any public cloud providers (as AWS, Google cloud, Digital Ocean 
 or the like).
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@ of the Services offered by A/I is under your control.
 We do not access your data, emails, files etc. stored on our servers unless needed for 
 troubleshooting purposes, or under suspicion of breaking our policy. In the case of 
 troubleshooting, we ask for your permission previously to the act of accessing your 
-data and inform you afterwards of all actions taken against the account in the 
+data and inform you afterwards of all actions taken on the account in the 
 transparency report addressed to account holder.
 
 Some of the Services provided by A/I such as Email and Jabber are operating based on 
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